Reflection due -- 300 words. How has your TED talk improved from your last draft? How could it have been improved further with more time/effort on this project?

The only improvement was the added statistics which could have been put in more appropriate points in the talk but due to lack of time it was crammed at the end, had there been more time an effort in the project the would have been tremendous upside, not only with the basic speaking actions like tone speed and diction, but with the setting could have been more formal to the situation where i could have been standing and addressing a cameral further away to simulate an audience, i could have taken more time to get a better grasp of i movie which could have helped me incorporate images and beneficial evidence and facts to my talk